@EUCommission Here, less writing things in "excellence-based" language.
L1: why the full stops?
L2: "these." "this" conjures up thoughts of "the message" being the thing.
L3: WTF is IDAHOT?
L3: Never begin a sentence with "But," "Because" or "And"
Also, fucking just write messages that we can get behind instead of sloganeering.